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This is the weekly newsletters for the Noble Pen Writer’s Group.

The Noble Pen for May 10, 2012

Next Noble Pen Meeting

May 10th, 2012 7 pm

Scott’s Family Restaurant

1906 Blairs Ferry Rd NE, Cedar Rapids

News

The collection of previous newsletters is available at http://noblepencr.org.

The paperback version of a newish autobiography of Mark Twain has just come out.  It says AUTObiography.  You wouldn’t think he would have anything new to say, being dead for over 100 years now, but apparently he had some material put away that long for posthumous publication.  Garrison Keillor was interested but found much of the book unexciting.

One author takes the approach of building a museum reflecting his novel while he was writing it.   Don’t get any ideas, Shannon.

Victories

Nick accomplished a notable amount of progress by finishing two chapters and editing fifteen.

Tyree returned after a nice run of five conventions with good sales.  He submitted two stories and started another story.  The merger of Sam’s Dot with White Cat publications will help distribution and leaves Tyree with the title of Editor-In-Chief.

Ciuin finished her 2nd to last paper of the school term and went home after the meeting to tackle the last one.  She had two pieces accepted for a package of anti-racist material that her organization will send to publishers.

Education

At the May 3rd meeting we discussed building tension.  There was agreement with much of this article, but some dissent also.

The Oxford Comma, the one that precedes the “and” in a list, is favored by many but rejected by others.  Now in Centre County, PA, you’d better not leave them out.  Commas can be expensive sometimes, as shown by this court case and this one.

Some people do not favor commas because their ancestors learned to get along without them after they found commas too difficult to transport over the mountains as they moved west.  They chose an extra barrel of flour over a supply of commas when they packed their wagons.   Even today, the cost of shipping a carton of commas restricts their use.

Some people resort to modifying apostrophes, which seem to be in excess supply these days.  However when lowering the apostrophes it is easy to bend them so that the best you can do is cut them down to salvage periods, which are only worth pennies on the dollar.  Few people use semicolons, so if you have an unneeded one you can cut it in two and have both a period and a comma for little effort. [Commentary condensed from a forum discussion.]

I have spent most of the day putting in a comma and the rest of the day taking it out.— Oscar Wilde

Upcoming Schedule

May 10th

Dylan
Stacie
Tyree

May 17th

Shannon
Lynda
Nick

May 24th

Ciuin
Tyree
Open slot

May 31st

Open slots

Keep Writing,

Bill

The Noble Pen for May 3, 2012

Next Noble Pen Meeting

May 3rd, 2012 7 pm

Scott’s Family Restaurant

1906 Blairs Ferry Rd NE, Cedar Rapids

News

Does anyone have an educational topic they want to present to fill the open slot this week?

The NY Times posts some readers reactions to the ebook price fixing suit.

This is a little late, but some may be interested in what one reviewer calls the top stories in literature of 2011.

Victories

Dylan has in hand a published copy of the humorous anthology of which he wrote about half.  He has organized his web site so it is easier to find his stories.  And he gave the last meeting an excellent presentation on creating eBooks.

Lynda got a job as head publisher for a new magazine.  It’s been a long time since she couldn’t do her work from home, and pajamas probably won’t do for this job.

Aimee got a printer to help with her writing (and marking up everybody else’s, too).

Shannon is on seven panels and a doing a reading (that’s right 7 – see the list) at the science fiction CONvergence in Minneapolis in July (schedule here).   Its theme is women in SF.  Trivia question for Shannon: Who was the first female science fiction protagonist? He may have to do some homework for some of the panels, like re-watching every Star Trek episode to see how women are involved.

Education

Shannon suggests we consider this article on grammar rules that aren’t real.  It is mainly about Internet postings, however, so you might want to maintain some restraint if you are submitting to an agent or publisher.  Everybody says the slush pile readers use any excuse to reject a manuscript.

While we are shaking up assumptions, you might want to see if these five gender stereotypes that have changed affect the way your historical characters think.  I haven’t checked their research, but a lot of sites are linking to the article.

Upcoming Schedule

May 3rd

Tyree
Nick
Open slot

May 10th

Dylan
Open slots

May 17th

Shannon
Lynda
Open slot

May 24th

Open slots

Keep Writing,

Bill

The Noble Pen for April 26, 2012

 

Next Noble Pen Meeting

Apr 26th, 2012 7 pm

Scott’s Family Restaurant

1906 Blairs Ferry Rd NE, Cedar Rapids

News

Welcome to Stacie, who found the group.

International mystery authors (such as Steig Larsson of Girl with the Dragon Tattoo) seem to be currently popular in the US according to this article.

Victories

Dylan got another commission to write.  His older novel is now on Kindle.

Lynda is recovering from surgery after a hand injury and expects to be able to type next week.

Education

Dylan found this interesting list of 25 ways to make an unlikable character.  Not everyone will agree with all of them, but it’s a pretty good list of things to avoid when inventing your own protagonist.

At the April 19 meeting, we discussed run-on sentences and comma splices.  Wikipedia has a pretty good summary, and someone has some partly contrary views.

Caution – the following article is not for those who have a problem reading about vulgarity.  It is an etymological discussion of British and American vulgar terms, including some that are more offensive, or have different meanings, on one side of the ocean than the other.

Henry Miller had 11 commandments for writing.  Two of the best are:
– When you can’t create you can work.
– Forget the books you want to write. Think only of the book you are writing.

Upcoming Schedule

April 26th

Shannon
Dylan
Presentation: How to make ebooks (Dylan)

May 3rd

Tyree
Nick
Open slot

May 10th

Dylan
Open slots

May 17th

Shannon
Open slots

Keep Writing,

Bill

The Noble Pen for April 19, 2012

Next Noble Pen Meeting

Apr 19th, 2012 7 pm

Scott’s Family Restaurant

1906 Blairs Ferry Rd NE, Cedar Rapids

News

We are planning to have a discussion on comma splices at the next meeting.  If anyone wants to contribute tutorial material, let the moderator know.

The US Department of Justice is continuing their lawsuit over the claimed price-fixing of ebooks, saying Steve Jobs and others at his level were involved. (page 1,  page 2).

Victories

Dylan has passed the half-year mark in his quest to write a weekly serial that runs for a year.  It is about 6-8,000 words a week.  He rejected a commission to write something that was too distasteful.

Bill, in a rare move, spent several hours organizing the plot of his novella.

Ciuin was asked by a very respected leader to be the paid educational director for a new Romani group that is starting up, and will be writing history material for home-schooling.

Shannon has sold a few copies of his book.

Education

This article shares some good advice on writing dialog, as does this one.

Inner monolog, putting in a character’s thoughts, is a specialized form of dialog for which the rules perhaps aren’t as clear.  One published author makes a good point about how clumsy italicized inner monologue (or quote marks around thinking, for that matter) can be, and gives an outstanding example of how much better third person sounds while effectively conveying that the character is thinking.

The use and treatment of inner monologue are somewhat debated and you may not find agreement.  Publishers may have individual style guidelines.

This article doesn’t condemn inner monologue entirely, but says that it should be done sparingly and carefully because it treads a line.  The way people actually think is in fragments.  Grammatical sentences won’t sound like thinking and actual thinking won’t be easy to read.

Another consideration is the narrator distance.  If you are writing in omniscient third person, i.e. the narrator may know things the main character does not, then first person inner monologue will stand out as a point of view change.

If you are writing close third person, i.e. all from the character’s POV but told as third person, then a first-person inner thought will be only a subtle change.  Used sparingly, it can emphasize the thoughts without quotes or italics.

Upcoming Schedule

April 19th

Nick
Dylan
Educational

April 26th

Shannon
Dylan
Open slot

May 3rd

Tyree
Nick
Open slot

May 10th
Open slots

Keep Writing,
Bill

The Noble Pen for Apr 12, 2012

Next Noble Pen Meeting

Apr 12th, 2012 7 pm

Scott’s Family Restaurant

1906 Blairs Ferry Rd NE, Cedar Rapids

News

It’s National Library Week.  Do something to enjoy or advance the written word.

I’d be happy if I could think that the role of the library was sustained and even enhanced in the age of the computer.—Bill Gates

Recently published letters show a different side of Ernest Hemingway.

James Bond with a beer?  The newest movie forgoes his famed shaken, not stirred martini for a brew.  Here’s a summary of his tastes in alcoholic beverages in the movies.

The Wizard of Oz was mentioned in discussions at the last meeting.  Here’s a recent book exploring the history and  symbolism of the Oz books.

Victories

Dylan got paid (but no extra) for his over-long commission.

Education

Writers aspiring to place their characters in England might want to review this short list of current terminology.  A detailed article in  Wikipedia  categorizes the differences and indicates some of the historical influences, and gives a nice table relating to educational grade terminology.  Google will find many more helpful discussions.

You know, I do speak the Queens English. It’s just the wrong Queens that’s all. It’s over the 59th Street Bridge.  It’s not over the Atlantic Ocean. ~Cyndi Lauper

Upcoming Schedule

April 12th

Shannon
Ciuin
Nick

April 19th

Nick
Lynda ?
Dylan

April 26th

Shannon
Dylan (unless someone wants it)
Open slot

May 3rd

Tyree
Nick
Open slot

Keep Writing,
Bill

The Noble Pen for Apr 5, 2012

Next Noble Pen Meeting

Apr 5th, 2012 7 pm

Scott’s Family Restaurant

1906 Blairs Ferry Rd NE, Cedar Rapids

News

The Hunger Games movie opened with $19.7 million in ticket sales its first night.  Other sources indicate a great many fans have read it on their Kindle.  Electronic books are attracting readers that don’t make a habit of reading paper books.

Not everyone is happy with “fast-food” popular fiction.  This article calls The Hunger Games, Harry Potter, and Twilight “too much of the same thing” and wants people to think more about the “beauty of language” and deeper ideas.

Publishers are continuing to go through their catalogs converting older works to ebooks.  For instance, Random House is putting out 13 of the Judy Blume books.

Victories

Dylan got a rejection from a publisher for a romance story he submitted.  He has received draft cover art (pretty cool) for one of his stories that he will publish as an ebook.

Shannon now has in print two of his works, Minions of Evil and the ParAbnormal article.  He is busy setting up web pages to promote his work.

Aimee wrote 17,000 words in one weekend.  It is for a different story that she had to get down so she could get back to the one we are reviewing.

Tyree attended a convention in Memphis and Sam’s Dot books sold very well.

Education

What motivates your characters?  There can be a wide variety of motivations.   Put another way, What’s at Stake?  Fiction and even memoirs need to address this question.

Motivation is the art of getting people to do what you want them to do because they want to do it. ~Dwight D. Eisenhower

We would frequently be ashamed of our good deeds if people saw all of the motives that produced them.  ~La Rochefoucauld

Upcoming Schedule

April 5th

Nick
Tyree
Shannon

April 12th

Shannon
Ciuin ?
Nick

April 19th

Nick
Lynda ?
Open slot

April 26th

Open slots

Keep Writing,

Bill

The Noble Pen for March 29, 2012

Next Noble Pen Meeting

Mar 29th, 2012 7 pm

Scott’s Family Restaurant

1906 Blairs Ferry Rd NE, Cedar Rapids

News

Your editor has been busier than his usual lazy ways, so must apologize for the lateness of this newsletter.

Victories

Dylan finished his 15,000 word commission at 42,000 words.  So much for planning.  He is also becoming an expert on formatting books for electronic readers, as he works with Sam’s Dot Publishing on their offerings.

Ciuin started a new piece based on her excellent adventures in New Orleans (it’s not Iowa!), featuring a mysterious brooch she saw in a shop and some of the restaurants she enjoyed.  Will it give away the secret gumbo recipe?

Shannon redesigned his web page to promote his forthcoming book.

Education

Google Ngram viewer offers an interesting way to look at word and phrase usage. Find out how common a term is.  See when a word was most used in or faded from American English, British English, fiction, nonfiction, or some other languages, etc.  See when a term replaced a similar one in usage.   (Thanks, Shannon)

Upcoming Schedule

March 29th

Nick
Tyree
Ciuin

April 5th (just before Easter)

Nick
Tyree?
Shannon

April 12th

Shannon (end of FA)
Ciuin ?
Open slot.

April 17th
Open slots

Keep Writing,

Bill

The Noble Pen for March 22, 2012

Next Noble Pen Meeting

Mar 22nd, 2012 7 pm

Scott’s Family Restaurant

1906 Blairs Ferry Rd NE, Cedar Rapids

News

Will authors be able to make money from ebooks?  UK author Lloyd Shepherd wrote an interesting blog on piracy of intellectual property.  David Carnoy has a similar article.  Some sites have been shut down.

Victories

Shannon finished the draft of Fangs Again.

Dylan has written 35,000 words of his 15,000 word commission.   He found he needed the extra words to tell the story, but doesn’t get paid for them.

Education

There are many reasons a manuscript may be rejected, including many that do not reflect badly on the writing.  That article discusses reasons.  It and this one list some famous authors who were rejected dozens of times.

A rejection is nothing more than a necessary step in the pursuit of success. -Bo Bennett

Rejection can be hard to take, but be thankful if this quote isn’t used:  “It is a tale told by an idiot, full of sound and fury, signifying nothing.”  – Shakespeare

Upcoming Schedule

March 22nd

Shannon
Aimee
Lynda

March 29th

Nick
Tyree
Ciuin

April 5th (just before Easter)

Nick
Tyree?
Shannon

April 12th

Open slots

Keep Writing,

Bill

The Noble Pen for March 15, 2012

Next Noble Pen Meeting

Mar 15th, 2012 7 pm

Scott’s Family Restaurant

1906 Blairs Ferry Rd NE, Cedar Rapids

News

Apple and five publishing houses are under investigation by the Dept of Justice over Apple’s plan to set ebook prices.  Wall Street Journal article here.

PayPal issued a statement on their policy of not allowing certain kinds of transactions.

Victories

Tyree’s Nyx 3, The Protectors is out.  It is for sale on Smashwords and in paperback from him or Sams Dot.  The Noble Pen is mentioned for helping him refine the story.

Shannon has a second book accepted for publication.  Fangs for Nothing will be published by Sams Dot.  Ciuin has already found a couple people eager to buy it after hearing a sample.  Shannon is negotiating for panels and readings at DemiCon and CONvergence.

Kris (we miss you!) may have another cover art commission.

Education

J. Shea posted an interesting essay on believability and author biases (intentional and unintentional).  Sometimes the author doesn’t convince the reader that things could be the way his story depicts them, even in a different universe.

Every novelist must begin by creating for himself a world, great or little, in which he can honestly believe. ~Joseph Conrad

I never cease being dumbfounded by the unbelievable things people believe. ~Leo Rosten

I like to use ‘I Can’t Believe it’s Not Butter’ on my toast in the morning …  How was breakfast? Unbelievable. ~Demetri Martin

Ironically, in today’s marketplace successful nonfiction has to be unbelievable, while successful fiction must be believable.  ~Jerry B. Jenkins

Upcoming Schedule

March 15th

Shannon
Lynda
Tyree

March 22nd

Shannon
Aimee
Lynda?

March 29th

Nick
Tyree
Ciuin

April 5th (just before Easter)

Nick
Tyree?
Shannon

Keep Writing,

Bill

The Noble Pen for Mar 8, 2012

Next Noble Pen Meeting

Mar 8th, 2012 7 pm

Scott’s Family Restaurant

1906 Blairs Ferry Rd NE, Cedar Rapids

News

If you have few or no fiction publication credits, you are eligible for the ongoing Writers of the Future contest for SF/Fantasy/Dark Fantasy writing .   There is no-entry-fee, and it has significant prizes.  Their rules prohibit using anyone else’s poetry, lyrics, characters, or universe in your story.  I’m not sure if you can use the universe you live in, since it has already been used by others ;-).  The contest is sponsored by L. Ron Hubbard‘s organization.  You might get on a mailing list, but nothing in the rules requires Auditing.

Victories

Tyree is glad that Dylan set up an on-line bookstore for Sams Dot.  It works – they made a sale.

Ciuin finished her play.

Education

A mish-mash of topics this week:

Tyree says he can see that workshopping your writing or using a critique group is a good idea.  He has benefited and can see the improvement in others.

Shannon recommends a book by Paul Murray, called Skippy Dies, for anyone who wants to see good use of experimentation with writing techniques, including second person and stream of consciousness, and a variety of tone from dismal to silly.  It’s long, but critically acclaimed.

You may want to check out Preditors and Editors, a web site that reports attempts to rip off writers and reviews legitimate avenues.

Upcoming Schedule

March 8th

Shannon
Aimee
Dylan

March 15th

Shannon
Lynda
Tyree

March 22nd

Shannon
Aimee
Open slot

March 29th

Nick
Tyree
Ciuin

Keep Writing,
Bill