Monthly Archives: December 2011

The Noble Pen for Jan 5, 2012

Next Noble Pen Meeting

Jan 5th, 2012  7 pm

Scott’s Family Restaurant

1906 Blairs Ferry Rd NE, Cedar Rapids

News

The Tor web site talks about a lot of recent and upcoming releases in various genres.

As does Barnes and Noble.

There’s a book on how to use use all of the features of your Kindle.  It’s a paperback.

Victories

Tyree is making great progress on Breathless Stars, having turned out another 4,000 words in 3 days.
Dylan’s massive contribution to the humorous anthology has earned him the privilege of writing a large biographical entry.  I suppose it also needs to be humorous.

Education

Ronda suggests the resources available from Purdue Online Writing Lab.  It’s worth browsing around their site, or using the site search to find topics in older postings, for things like Common Pitfalls,   How to Use the Apostrophe, style guides for your non-fiction writing, and Active and Passive Voice.

It took me fifteen years to discover I had no talent for writing, but I couldn’t give it up because by that time I was too famous.~ Robert Benchley

First, find out what your hero wants, then just follow him! ~Ray Bradbury

Upcoming Schedule

January 5th

Kate
Aimee
Shannon

January 12th

Nick
Ciuin
Shannon

January 19th
Nick
Tyree
open slot

January 26th
Tyree
Ronda
open slot

Keep Writing,
Bill

The Noble Pen for Dec 29, 2011

Next Noble Pen Meeting

Dec 29th, 2011  7 pm

Scott’s Family Restaurant

1906 Blairs Ferry Rd NE, Cedar Rapids

Christmas crept into Pine Cove like a creeping Christmas thing: dragging garland, ribbon, and sleigh bells, oozing eggnog, reeking of pine, and threatening festive doom like a cold sore under the mistletoe.

–Christopher Moore, The Stupidest Angel

News

In a monumental vacuum of coordination, Bill didn’t tell Shannon whether or not he would send the weekly newsletter.  The result was each of them sending a newsletter.  This page attempts to combine both, so it is longer than usual.

An unusual miniature manuscript by Charlotte Bronte sold for an amazing sum of 690,000 British Pounds, somewhat over a million dollars US.   It has 4,000 words on 19 pages, each page less than 1/4 the size of index card.   Can you put 900 words on an index card?

Could your next  computer be watching you, like HAL?

Ridley Scott has a scifi movie coming out next summer.  Everybody denies it is a prequel to Alien.

Read about a move to put more interactive content in fiction books on e-readers.

Victories

Dylan’s serial is sparking internet arguments, which are very rare and always civil.
Dylan did not win Lulu’s short story contest. Though he should have, and I’m willing to start an Internet argument with anyone who disagrees
Shannon submitted an article to ParABnormal magazine, which will no doubt make him a pariah amongst is skeptical friends.  He actually wanted to be a piranha.

Education

Another article on e-book pricing. http://gigaom.com/2011/12/15/publishers-still-missing-the-point-on-e-book-prices/

Since some of us have been struggling with grammar lately, I looked for a quick guide to solve some common problems. http://ollinmorales.wordpress.com/2011/02/02/8-common-grammar-mistakes-you-dont-know-youre-making-and-how-to-fix-them/

And, as always, if you’re looking for a good place to look up a grammar issue, try Grammar Girl http://grammar.quickanddirtytips.com/

Well, maybe not education but at least food for thought.  Last week the material was about planning.  Sometimes you need to get started without a plan, and then go back to straighten out the plan.

Writing comes more easily if you have something to say.  ~Sholem Asch

Write down the thoughts of the moment.  Those that come unsought for are commonly the most valuable.  ~Francis Bacon

Writing became such a process of discovery that I couldn’t wait to get to work in the morning:  I wanted to know what I was going to say.  ~Sharon O’Brien

Storytelling reveals meaning without committing the error of defining it.  ~Hannah Arendt

Upcoming Schedule

December 29th

Shannon
Tyree
Ronda

January 5th

Kate
Aimee
Shannon

January 12th

Nick
Ciuin
Shannon

January 19th

Nick
Tyree
open slot

Keep Writing,
Shannon and Bill

The Noble Pen for Dec 22, 2011

Next Noble Pen Meeting

Dec 22nd, 2011  7 pm

Scott’s Family Restaurant

1906 Blairs Ferry Rd NE, Cedar Rapids

News

After missing a meeting in November, the group seemed to say “We’re not letting any more steenkin’ holidays interfere with the meeting schedule, so we have reviews scheduled as listed below.

Victories

Nick got paid for his railfan pieces that are to be published in a book.

Tyree went on a writing binge and wrote 8,000 words on the Breathless Stars story.

Ciuin had a lot to celebrate.  She got her old laptop to work again and recovered all of the files she had been missing.   Classes are over and next semester she won’t have a night class, so she will be able to join us.  And she wanted to meet an author so much that she actually flew to Berkeley to a conference (those who have heard her talk about flying realize how motivated she must have been).  This author, on her must-meet list, is head of the Romani in the US.  He had heard of her work.   She now has an autographed book and contact information.

Education

“The plot thins!”
“Don’t you mean the plot thickens?”
“You haven’t read this plot.” ~ Peanuts cartoon

Here’s some advice on how to plan your novel so the plot doesn’t thin.  This article says you can write the synopsis first, and essentially it is the outline.   You may want to use these eight suggestions to outline your plot.

Good books don’t give up all their secrets at once. ~ Stephen King

Upcoming Schedule

December 22th

Tyree
Bob
Dylan

December 29th

Shannon
Tyree
Ronda

January 5th

Kate
Aimee
Shannon
January 12th

Nick
Ciuin
open slot

Keep Writing,

Bill

The Noble Pen for Dec 15, 2011

Next Noble Pen Meeting

Dec 15th, 2011  7 pm

Scott’s Family Restaurant

1906 Blairs Ferry Rd NE, Cedar Rapids

News

No news is good news.

Victories

Kris found four readers for Oblivion.  One liked it so well they read it and returned a critique of 4 chapters within 2 1/2 hours.  She also supplied artwork for Shannon’s  story Call of the Beast.

Education

At the last meeting we discussed Eight-Point Arc defined by Nigel Watts, and the outline we used can be downloaded.  I think we agreed that it is not the only way a story can be structured, but most tend to follow it to some extent and it is a good planning tool.

Chila offers a link on close third-person writing and a better one that applies to more genres than the writer focuses on.

Anecdotes don’t make good stories. Generally I dig down underneath them so far that the story that finally comes out is not what people thought their anecdotes were about. ~ Alice Munro

Upcoming Schedule

December 15th

Shannon
Dylan
Nick

December 22th

Tyree
Bob
Dylan

December 29th

Shannon
Tyree
Ronda

January 5th

Kate
Aimee
Shannon

Keep Writing,

Bill

The Noble Pen for Dec 8, 2011

Next Noble Pen Meeting

Dec 8th, 2011  7 pm

Scott’s Family Restaurant

1906 Blairs Ferry Rd NE, Cedar Rapids

News

A poll showed enough interest to have a meeting on the Thursday before Christmas, although not all the regulars can attend.  Still, there may be folks who don’t have their usual commitments then and might show up.  Shannon will moderate.

Victories

Shannon got a rejection letter on Fangs.

Dylan donated the writing of a commissioned story to a good cause.  He also found his four  last-round beta readers for FOTS and gave them the revised print.

Ciuin, although not at our meeting to report it, has been scheduled to present a session on Romani: Women of the World at the Beyond Rubies women’s conference in the spring.

Education

Chila passed on this link to help some of us who are not familiar with the Slipstream genre.

Patricia C. Wrede of the Science Fiction & Fantasy Writers of America offers an extensive list of questions to help fiction writers build their story’s world.  Even Wikipedia has some suggestions on methods, although a bit dry to read.

Here is another collection of articles, including some setting or world building comments that are more generally applicable than just to F&SF.  This one in particular discusses a wide range of genres.

World building isn’t the whole point of good writing, however.  Shannon suggests this page of satire on over-planned but under-inspired novel writing.

Upcoming Schedule

December 8th

Kate
Shanna
Shannon

December 15th

Shannon
Dylan
Nick

December 22th

Tyree
Bob
Dylan

December 29th

Shannon
Tyree?
Open slot

Keep Writing,

Bill