Monthly Archives: November 2017

The Noble Pen for Nov 30, 2017

Next Noble Pen Meeting

November 30th, 2017 at 7 pm

Scott’s Family Restaurant

1906 Blairs Ferry Rd NE, Cedar Rapids

News

Our Dec 21st meeting would come close to Christmas.  Do we want to have a meeting to give us some sense of normalcy in that crazy time, or do we need the time to prepare for all the seasonal activities?  Please comment on this at the next couple meetings.

Victories

If you are reading this, you survived what was probably an overdose of calories on Thanksgiving.  Perhaps you even did some writing.

Education

Many word pairs cause confusion.  Homophones (their, there, they’re) are probably the biggest problem for writers.  Can you distinguish between since and because? Can you distinguish between Insure and ensure?    How about raise and rise?  (Link lists several other pairs also.)

Upcoming Schedule

November 30
Stacie S.
Nathan
Ciuin

December 7
Nick
Stacy H.
Aime

December 14 (annual squeeze-in, due to large party in usual space)
Uriah
Ciuin
Open slot

December 21
Do we want to meet so close to Christmas?

December 28
Open slots

Keep Writing,
Bill

The Noble Pen for Nov 23, 2017 Holiday Edition

Next Noble Pen Meeting

Nov 30th, 2017 at 7 pm

Scott’s Family Restaurant

1906 Blairs Ferry Rd NE, Cedar Rapids

News

No meeting this week.  Most employers are giving their people the day off to work on their writing and we wouldn’t want to interfere with that.  Sorry, Aime, that you aren’t among them.

Victories

Randy’s book got a big and favorable article in the Sunday CR Gazette and another review on Amazon.

Shannon sold a story to an anthology.

Education

Writers differ in how they go about revisions – do you go back frequently or wait until the draft is done?  If you have a lot of story in your head, maybe it’s best to get it typed before you lose it.  But as you write, you may think of things said earlier that need to change for the way the story is developing.  Rachel Scheller  describes four approaches.

Read what several famous writers said about revisions.

And here’s some revision advice from the University of North Carolina.

Half my life is an act of revision. ~John Irving

Write drunk, edit sober. ~misatributed to Hemingway

I don’t write a quick draft and then revise; instead, I work slowly page by page, revising and polishing.  ~Dean Koontz

Upcoming Schedule

November 23
Thanksgiving, no meeting

November 30
Stacie S.
Nathan
Ciuin

December 7
Nick
Stacy H.
Aime

December 14 (annual squeeze-in, due to large party in usual space)
Uriah
Ciuin
Open slot

December 21
Do we want to meet so close to Christmas?

December 28
Open slots

Keep Writing,
Bill

The Noble Pen for Nov 16, 2017

Next Noble Pen Meeting

Nov 16th, 2017 at 7 pm

Scott’s Family Restaurant

1906 Blairs Ferry Rd NE, Cedar Rapids

News

Science Fiction News has issued their autumn (northern hemisphere) edition.  They list a number of recent author deaths.  Prominent among them is Brian Aldiss, author of over 80 books and 300 short stories published from 1942 to 2013.

Victories

Stacie S. and Laura tried a “write night” at Ramsey’s, interacting with other writers, drinking wine, and generating some words.

Ciuin pushed through writer’s block and wrote on a difficult scene for Chessmaster.

Jeremiah finished an on-line writing course.

Education

Jeremiah recommends a free college course, a series of 14 hours of lectures by Brandon Sanderson on writing.  Here’s the first one.  He says says “I found the series to be useful to my writing process. Brandon is an engaging speaker and a brilliant writer.”

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A rhetorical question is one that doesn’t need an answer or the writer doesn’t expect the reader to answer. They should not be used frequently in most writing.

Agents prefer you to avoid them in queries. The agent wants you to tell them about your story, not leave them guessing.  Give them a bunch questions, and they are likely to say, “No,” and hit delete.  Similar advice here. “Will the hero find and defeat the villain in time to save the damsel?”  It would be better to state the hero’s problem, “The hero must find the villain and defeat her in time to rescue the damsel.”

They might be more acceptable in moderation for a blurb, but even there, go lightly.  The topic is a bit controversial.

“What if there were no rhetorical questions?” ~originator unknown.

Upcoming Schedule

November 16
Stacy H (3k)
Nathan (3k)
Deanna (6k)

November 23
Thanksgiving, no meeting

November 30
Stacie S.
Nathan
Ciuin

December 7
Nick
Stacy H.
Aime

December 14
Uriah
Ciuin
Open slot

Keep Writing,
Bill

The Noble Pen for Nov 9, 2017

Next Noble Pen Meeting

Nov 9th, 2017 at 7 pm

Scott’s Family Restaurant

1906 Blairs Ferry Rd NE, Cedar Rapids

News

A professor uses computer analysis to study literature and other writing.

Victories

Ciuin gave her talk in Council Bluffs and sold out the small printing of PT.  She improved the cover for the next printing.

Stacie’s Gardens story is over 50k words now.

Stacy H is blogging.

Nick wrote a little on his sequel.

Education

Self-publish?  Small press? Large publishing house? Decisions, decisions.

Writer’s Digest offers a free nine-page download on “Step-by-step guide to the Publishing Process” when you sign up for their email newsletter.  It covers a lot of how things work with a major publishing house.  Nathan Bransford offers his summary of the process.

Randy Ingermanson compares the process for different size publishers.  Unfortunately, the Preditors and Editors site is no longer active, but offers links to help you learn to  avoid scams and deal with many aspects of getting a book out.

If you are looking to get into a big house, an editor tells why a writer needs an agent.  You may benefit from Writer’s Digest’s Guide to Literary Agents that comes out each fall (or on Amazon)  They also have guides for magazine writers,  screenwriters, poets, photographers, and other market segments.  AgentQuery offers some resources.

A resource often  mentioned is Query Tracker.  Check it out to see if you could benefit either from registering for its services or just from browsing its forum for information on agents, publishers, writing techniques, success stories, etc.  You could spend days on the site.

An agent gives advice on writing a query letter.  Writer’s Digest published this list of Dos and Don’ts for queries.  Agent Rachelle Gardner gives her own desired query format (which won’t match other agents).  A poor attempt at a query letter will NOT favorably impress an agent.

Here are 10 things a writer should find out if offered representation, and 10 things they may need to answer.

A typical agent in New York gets 400 query letters a month. Of those, they might ask to read 3-4 manuscripts, and of those, they might ask to represent 1.  [ …]  Above all, a query letter is a sales pitch and it is the single most important page an unpublished writer will ever write. It’s the first impression and will either open the door or close it. It’s that important, so don’t mess it up.  Mine took 17 drafts and two weeks to write. ~Nicholas Sparks

Upcoming Schedule

November 9
Stacie S.
Ciuin
Aime

November 16
Stacy H (3k)
Nathan (3k)
Deanna (6k)

November 23
Thanksgiving, no meeting

November 30
Open slots

December 7
Nick
Stacy H.
Open slot

Keep Writing,
Bill