Monthly Archives: February 2017

The Noble Pen for Mar 2, 2017

Next Noble Pen Meeting

March 2nd, 2017 at 7 pm

Scott’s Family Restaurant

1906 Blairs Ferry Rd NE, Cedar Rapids

News

It’s becoming almost too common to make news when someone discovers lost work by a famous author.  This time it’s Walt Whitman writing prose, not poetry.

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Requests for review slots are at an all-time low.  Polish up something and get your slot.  You can email me with your request or wait until the meeting.

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Here’s an interview with an author about what many recognize as a major problem for our democracy.  Too many people only hear one side of things so are not informed enough to recognize fake stories or to vote objectively, and social media contributes strongly to that trend.

Victories

Dakota will participate in a large book signing next week in Kansas City.  She released another book for publication and expects the cover art soon.

Uriah made a web site to be used for his book.

Stacie S. is finding time to write again during the baby’s naps.

Education

Run-on or comma spliced sentences are a common problem (another discussion).  Those are words that should be two independent sentences, but are spliced together with a comma or no punctuation at all.

For example, “We will miss your party we  are going to the concert.”  There are two complete sentences here that could stand alone, each with a subject and verb,  “We will miss your party.” and “We are going to the concert.”

Adding a comma between them does not make them legal.  A semicolon would work since they are closely related and the semicolon is a more powerful punctuation, but semicolons are generally discouraged in fiction.

The other way to join independent clauses is with a conjunction (and, but, because, after, etc.).  “We will miss your party because we going to the concert .”  This may be a smooth or clumsy method depending on the sentences.

Upcoming Schedule

March 2
Nick
Uriah
Dylan

March 9
Open slots

March 16
Open slots

March 23
Open slots

March 30
Open slots

Keep Writing,
Bill

The Noble Pen for Feb 23, 2017

Next Noble Pen Meeting

February 23rd, 2017 at 7 pm

Scott’s Family Restaurant

1906 Blairs Ferry Rd NE, Cedar Rapids

News

If you didn’t get the events listed in last week’s news put on your calendar, go back and do that.

Victories

Randy got his book back from his editor.

Dylan drafted a chapter of a commissioned story.

Education

We’ve mentioned how some writers plan extensively and others write by the seat of their pants, although perhaps most are somewhere in between.  For those who want to improve their planning, this article on outlining may help.  Here is a page with downloadable links for several types of outlines as fillable PDF forms you can edit and print.  A seven-point story structure is a classic configuration that may help you shape the story.  Here’s  a collection of outlines used by successful authors.

But not everyone believes in detailed planning.

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Jim C. Hines blogs about author income, with some extensive statistics (part1)(part 2).  The good news is there is lots of money to be made, so the mean income is attractive.  The bad news is that relatively few people reach the higher levels of success, so the median is at poverty level and explains why most writers have day jobs.

Upcoming Schedule

February 23
Dakota
Megan
Stacie S.

March 2
Nick
Open slots

March 9
Open slots

March 16
Open slots

March 23
Open slots

Keep Writing,
Bill

The Noble Pen for Feb 16, 2017

Next Noble Pen Meeting

February 16th, 2017 at 7 pm

Scott’s Family Restaurant

1906 Blairs Ferry Rd NE, Cedar Rapids

News

Writers are invited to sign up to read their work (more info) in ten minute slots at the Palisades Cafe in Mount Vernon on the 1st and 3rd Wednesdays each month.  Next is February 15th at 8 pm.

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Conveniently, the 2nd Wednesday of the month is the date for the Writers House meeting at the Cedar Rapids Public Library, 6 to 8 pm.

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Finally, you might want to attend a reading by three area authors at CSPS Hall on Tuesday, Feb 28 at 7 pm.

Victories

Randy has a good cover photo.

Dakota got back rights to a series that a publisher hadn’t acted on.

Education

For a mentally stable writer, it may be difficult to accurately portray an antagonist who has a warped mind (none of us are warped, of course).    Peter James offers advice on how to write those warped minds.  Some tips on insane characters.  And more advice on writing psycotic characters.

Insanity is relative. It depends on who has who locked in what cage.  ~ Ray Bradbury

I don’t suffer from insanity, I enjoy every minute of it! ~Edward Hastings Ford

Upcoming Schedule

February 16
Uriah
Stacy
Randy

February 23
Dakota
Megan
Open slot

March 2
Nick
Open slots

March 9
Open slots

March 16
Open slots

Keep Writing,
Bill

The Noble Pen for Feb 9, 2017

Next Noble Pen Meeting

February 9th, 2017 at 7 pm

Scott’s Family Restaurant

1906 Blairs Ferry Rd NE, Cedar Rapids

Victories

Dylan got another subscriber on Patreon.  Broken Typewriter had enough sales he has to pay sales tax.

Cassie’s newsletter far outgrew the capability of the service she had been using and is now expanded on a new service.

Education

Once you have a draft of a story, you need to clean it up.  Here is a list of suggestions on how to  how to approach it.   Other aspects become the targets on later passes.  Then there is the larger view of the process going beyond the solo cleanups.

Upcoming Schedule

February 9
Uriah
Megan
Stacy

February 16
Open slots

February 23
Open slots

March 2
Open slots

March 9
Open slots

Keep Writing,
Bill